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My sanctuary
With the walls
and all the clothes strewn
not just on the floor
or the bed
but everywhere else instead
with walls and wires
clothing and such attire
and crumbs and ants
and shirts and pants
that is my room
no matter where I go
it always looks different
but always feels the same
doesn't matter how much
i think it's tidy
everyone else always sees a mess
and even if my socks
always seem to be hiding
I always seem to get dressed
and even if cans
of soda pop
always congregate by my bed
There still is room
on the dresser top
I always say to myself in my head
Now I know you think
my room may stink
and needs to be cleared of trash
I always seem
to keep track of it all
and even find some cash
my room is a mess
and im not the best
of keeping this these opinions
off my chest
but I like my room
I don't need a broom
and it's not going to change
anytime soon
that is my room
that's how it will stay
from every house
and every day
My room <3
With the walls
and all the clothes strewn
not just on the floor
or the bed
but everywhere else instead
with walls and wires
clothing and such attire
and crumbs and ants
and shirts and pants
that is my room
no matter where I go
it always looks different
but always feels the same
doesn't matter how much
i think it's tidy
everyone else always sees a mess
and even if my socks
always seem to be hiding
I always seem to get dressed
and even if cans
of soda pop
always congregate by my bed
There still is room
on the dresser top
I always say to myself in my head
Now I know you think
my room may stink
and needs to be cleared of trash
I always seem
to keep track of it all
and even find some cash
my room is a mess
and im not the best
of keeping this these opinions
off my chest
but I like my room
I don't need a broom
and it's not going to change
anytime soon
that is my room
that's how it will stay
from every house
and every day
My room <3
I was jumping around a lot with the speed and the rythm (IDC how you spell rythm...) a bit with this poem, but it seemed okay, and I seemed to get my point across that it's a messy room.
Haha, I guess it's a messy poem for a messy room! tehe!
Haha, I guess it's a messy poem for a messy room! tehe!
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Love the poem... it is so true to you in every way!